Second Review

Second review from Gren Blackall, a Linkedin associate.

Gren Blackall

Bank Consulting Practice Director, specializing in Customer Engagement from Strategy to Data

Portland, Maine Area

Banking

Current	Bank Strategic Consulting
Previous	CCG Catalyst Consulting Group, Gorham Savings Bank, Clark consulting
Education	University of California, Los Angeles

Hi - how's your book going? I like your writing style - nice bursts of information, surrounded by imagery. Like a punch on an otherwise uneventful day. Cayenne pepper in the talcum powder. Your metaphors don't make us work, they just walk by leaving us moved. "There were dead fish all over the road. His father opened the door of the car and vomited." That's a wonderful way to sum up an accident, conveying a very real situation with unassuming images. Cool. Take care! Gren